Monday, May 9, 2011

Foundling Review

"There Was A Clatter"

2 comments:

  1. I've thought about the weakness of boundaries (especially in trailer park settings) and love how you convey the character's sense of violation.
    I also love your use of language - "Her surroundings paused in horror" and "Her apartment stared back at her" being two of my favorites.

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